Dear Readers,
So as an important message I wanted to say that according to me there are two things that are very important in every relationship and that is trust and sacrifice. Without these two things it is impossible to have the perfect relationship. At some point in time we all have to give up something and show extreme faith and trust in our partner. So while I was thinking about these two things I went back to dabbling at poetry. I hope you like the two poems... the second one is my favorite because I have applied a new technique of response. Hopefully that poem has the effect I wanted it to have.
So as an important message I wanted to say that according to me there are two things that are very important in every relationship and that is trust and sacrifice. Without these two things it is impossible to have the perfect relationship. At some point in time we all have to give up something and show extreme faith and trust in our partner. So while I was thinking about these two things I went back to dabbling at poetry. I hope you like the two poems... the second one is my favorite because I have applied a new technique of response. Hopefully that poem has the effect I wanted it to have.
Walking Away
He makes me mad
He makes me wait
He makes me frustrated
But still I give him my heart on a silver plate
His eyes make me smile
His see’s in me what others can’t see
His pranks make me feel young
His hand in mine is how it’s supposed to be
Things are never are… how they are meant
He wants and cares for another
She brings a smile on his face
I’m handing him over to her
I’m walking away from him
Because his happiness means the world to me
He’s gave me more than I could want
Now it’s my turn to return the favor and set him free
May she love him like I always did
Care for him how I never could
Take his sorrow and pain
Hold is hand like I would…

It Will Be Better This Time
I made a mistake
I betrayed your trust
Forgive me… take me back
I got carried away in lust
I look back at our pictures
Those moments that we spent
The love that you showered on me
I know that I have left a permanent dent
I will be the best this time baby
I won’t let you down
I’ll be by your side whenever you look
Give me a chance don’t let me drown...
You say you made a mistake
You want to redo what you have done
It’s too late and everything has changed
You can hide from what you have done but not run
When you look at old pictures…. you see love
I see deceit, betrayal, and all the pain of your memory
I trusted you ...I loved you like no other
All I received in return was cold treachery
You crushed me beneath your lies
Didn’t even give me a chance to breathe
You already have drowned me
You ask me to save you
But the dead can’t give life
P.S. I hope you like them and see the emotion behind them :)
Feel the Love,
ℓα∂у ∂αвααηg
heyyyy great wrk once again lady dabang.. loved the 2nd poem moreeeee.... keep it up
ReplyDeleteI really love reading your poems! Shows such a deep and lovely side of you ♥
ReplyDeleteYou seriously need to teach me how to write poems so effortlessly...
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